March 24, 2008

Short Story!

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his _____ at ______ .

_____ came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said ______.

She fainted.

*Please cut paste the entire story in your comments section. Fill in the blanks with your creative talent. All stories will be posted on Psychobabble on March 26!*

36 comments:

Ghost Particle said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his boxers at Wendy's.

Sneha came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said happy birthday poochkins.

She fainted.

p/s: i dun feel creative today. how come ur not online anymore uh?

Hiren said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his Tarzan outfit at Taj’s Conference Room for the meeting with prospective high profile clients from South Africa.

His secretary came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "Darling, relax, this is a new strategy to get these delegates notice our weather friendly clothesline ... On such a scorching day there’s no other attire so comforting ... is it? Roy has done a superb job in designing this one; look how conspicuous he has made our brand tag too; make a note we have to give him a raise this time ...”

She fainted.

BIG Omi said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his Brooklands , Bentley, at East Front of Buckingham Palace.

The Queen came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said , "Your Highness, Camilla Parker shall coup d'├ętat as Queen and proceed to Rule English Land hereafter".

She fainted.

CM-Chap said...

I'm so bad at it... tried for a hwil couldn't.. May be 2maro I shall try.

Satish Bolla said...

Buddy, so u r trying to bring out the hidden creative talents of your readers. Sounds to be a nice idea. Let me give it a shot. Here goes my story.

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in "his car(which is badly out of shape), his face bruised and his clothes are torn and covered with mud" at "sharp 8PM(already late b 3 hours" .

"His mother" came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "Mother, I was trying to come in time and in a hurry, didn't notice the parked truck on the turn".

She fainted.

Nirmal's Blog said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his new Porshe at Jennifer's place.

Jennifer came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said " Sorry sweetheart meet my new love Angelina".

She fainted.

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey nice blog..bet i cant stay away frm it...

Ashish said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his Chaddis at his own wedding .

Guests came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "Ye Andar ki Baat Hai".

She fainted.

PREETI said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his 'broken-down, blue Maruti 800' at her 'sprawling mansion'.

She came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "I just got married"

She fainted.

rayshma said...

he arrived in his impeccable grim reaper costume at A's doorstep.
A's mother came out, saw him and screamed.
he smiled and said "i've come for A"
she fainted.

more laterz...

Amit said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his bullockcart at Ny int'l airport .

Angelina Jolie came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "would like to have a test drive, maa'm??

She fainted.


hehhehe...lolzzzzz

rOhit said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his shorts at her office.

She came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said I forgot the condom in you bag. ;)

She fainted.

Nirmal's Blog said...

hey i had completed ur blanks and posted it...
cant find it now..

Solitaire said...

Folks! Am not publishing the comments but keep them coming!! Have ten so far!!!!

You will get to see the final product on the 26th!

c e e d y said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his swimming trunks with his large belly hanging out at the apartment complex's community center.

Guests and family came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said (embarisingly) thank you all and specially YOU for the suprise birthday party

She fainted.

v I v E k said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his bicycle at 12am .

Grandma came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "your time is up"!.

She fainted.

haha..thanks for visiting my blog:)
cheers..

Deobrat Singh said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his coffin at the door .

She came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "Darling, I am not going to leave you in peace".

She fainted.

Ankur said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his Limo at the airport, where Deepika must be arriving soon.

She came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said, "i want to ask you something, i was waiting, for you, the moment you come to India" , "Will you marry me?"

She fainted.

Ankur said...

well, i dont find a word limit there ;)
:D

Nirmal's Blog said...

ok ....i thgt whre my post vanished,..

vEENs said...

Snaha, I m in a terrible mood and to let out my idiotic mood swings...i got to write smething idiotic..

if u dnt like it.. dnt publish.. it is not funny like others :-|

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It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his black Bently at 1 in the night as I had asked him to .

But somethings never work out the way we plan, don't they? Bree's drug wore off early and she came out of her sleep 3 hours earlier than I expected and came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "Hey honey, what's up?".

She fainted.

I had made Bree believe that Rex was dead.

Well it was good, she had fainted, I had time to pack her up and load her into the car. He came near me and gave me a kiss. We had played this game for a so long, I was not going to let this blow up because of a single female, even if she was my mother.

I know, it was a bad girl who conspired to kill her mother. It was a bad girl who kept relationship with her mother's boyfriend. But the lady deserved it. There was a time, I loved her, but she betrayed my trust. She killed my father. However everyone tried to say it was an heart-attack. It happened because my mom was betraying my father and he came to know it!

I knew a little, but I didn't know it would kill my dad. After my dad died, my mom cried for half a day in front of all the guests who had come for the services, later that day, the lawyers told her that whatever the property was their, was on my name. I knew then. how much my dad loved and trusted me. But my mom was going to be the caretaker till I turn 25. And as I didn't trust her, i had to get her out of my way.

I knew Rex would help, as he was with my mom, for the luxuries. I told him, I will have him ad give him 10%. But i Knew I was NOT going to do that. I had plans for him too.

i knew mom, didn't know how to swim, and she won't even try with her hands and legs try.Rex was a master mind.


Sometimes I think I should give my mom a fair chance. But on moments like this, I don't give myself to think of a chance.

Rex started the car and sped off.

And now it was time for plan B to get rid of Rex. I waited 15 minutes, time enough for him to drown my mom, and called the police.

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I m sorry, I have totally no idea.. how i came with that :-|

have a nice day Solitaire!

Keshi said...

awww not fair I missed out on this one! why didnt u give it some more time :(


Now I u'stand that post in ur other blog :(


Keshi.

Solitaire said...

there's still time!!!

Ankur said...

well, some stories are published, some are not??? :O

can someone explain!! :D

vagabond dreamer said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his Beatup jalopy at her apartment building.

Sarah came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said honey i shrunk the kids.

She fainted.

Solitaire said...

That someone is ME who will explain things..

The stories which have made it to Psychobabble are published...

The moment a story is published on psychobabble it is published in the comments section here.

Be patient, your turn will come too.

Ankur said...

oh.. thanks for explaining :|

Iceman said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his "langot" at the birthday party.

The birthday girl came out, she saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said should I do a favor by taking that off as well & did a full monty!

She fainted.

rOhit said...

Oye! Where's my story? :O

I published a comment here too. :(((z

The Keeper of the Keys said...

i'm so not upto this right now...but good fun nevertheless...

AmitL said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his UFO at Mars Disco.

His wife came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said 'Guess what-I married an Indian girl during my Earth visit.

She fainted.

Pavi!!!! said...

Mabbe this is lame..but i wanted to enter the contest even if i wont win the prize (hint, hint!)..so here goes my story

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his "B'day suit"(ie nude!) at the "Blog club" .

The Bloggers came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said "I'm the Psycho, sneha was talking about"!.

They fainted.

PS: I changed she fainted to "they fainted". plsssssss permit maadi?

Sam said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his _car_ at _teh villa_ .

_She_ came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said _Mom, I'm home__.

She fainted.

Mansi Trivedi said...

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his santa costume at her bar .

Bartender Lila came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said Ho burp Ho burp Ho burrrrrrp.

She fainted.

Keshi said...

plz plz accept my story too Solitaire :(

here it is:



It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his shirtless-status at Keshi's place.

Keshi came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said 'come get me babeh John Abraham is finally here'.

She fainted.



LOL!
Keshi.

Ria said...

I hope i qualify to feature in ur post too :) Here comes my story:

It was a bright sunny afternoon. He arrived in his sparkling white Mercedes at the Gym.

Ria came out, saw him, and screamed.

He smiled and said 'looks like you weren't expecting me to be here, by the way i am the one who has been your secret admirer.So how about dinner tonight?'

She fainted.