Inspired by Dr. Pri and Stupidosaur, I bring forth a proposition to make a sweet story with short sentences. Here are the rules.
1) Each person can add only FOUR WORDS at one time.
2) You cannot post two consecutive comments.
3) Keep the story flowing. Begin where the person before you ended.
4) Make sure to add the correct punctuation if you are completing someone else's sentence.
5) Messages not intended for the story should be placed in brackets in the comment.
6) Any derogatory remarks/inappropriate statements will be promptly removed and will be replaced with my choice of words.
The final story will be published in WARM FUZZIES when an appropriate ending appears to emerge!
Remember, keep it short and sweet! Let's have some fun!
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carrying sackloads of durian
Everyone got excited as
they were organic/thornless durians.
[hopefully the organic/thornless counts as one word :P]
Farting would be easier
[wait da minute, there are NO organic durians, let alone thornless ones. :P]
@Ghost
[Thanks for clearing that up. I was under the impression that the saga that we are all narrating here is inspired by a true life story. *rolling eyes*]
[[carolina] hemm...arent we making this up as we go? :P okay okay i get ur point, it fantasy land...there can be durians without thorns...bt then it wont b da king of the fruits no more :D ]
but Cinderogrella was too
[hey sneh i need u email id to add it to the new frnds blog pls cud u mail it itzme.hemu4u@ymail.com :)]
[urs..hemu..]
[cont from Cindogrella was too]
preoccupied to notice that,
[Ghost, I consider the king of fruits to be the Mango. Maybe the Durian can be the prince of fruits :P]
[Sorry Sol, we are interrupting the story for such highly intellectual conversation :P]
[Ok people
We are at that confusing stage again.
Farting would be easier
but Cinderogrella was too
preoccupied to notice that,
gobbled multiple to impress]
(something needs to change here, so that it makes sense. Ceedy, why don't you give it a shot, since you just joined in.)
[this is in reference to the earlier part when Cindogrella was trying to kiss shrek and he said nahi!!!!!]
[Ceedy, that was a LONG time ago!! I asked to fix the current part, not make it more confusing!! Sigh!]
[@cg if its confusing I can delete the last two comments and join later....lemme know]
[didn't carolinagirl just prompt ceedy to break the law of no subsequent story comments?. Ceedy complied too!
Anyways lets continue]
[[carol...] mango! but but...aww comeon...mango is female, durian is male. mango can be the queen. durian is king...no matter what :P
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now u try draw a mango...and then i might consider the king part :P]
[ I prompted Ceedy to make the flow of the story more sensible. What i asked was to CHANGE the flow of the story. This would mean that a sentence would have to be DELETED, and REPLACED with something more sensible. Ceedy, please feel free to delete whatever u want, and replace with whatever u think fits better. Sigh, I need a break.]
Sajan the Durian Man!
Sajan who everyone asked
[deleted both earleir comments as the flow is better with
preoccupied to notice that,
Sajan the Durian Man!
Sajan who everyone asked ]
[guys, this is all fun and games. I hope no one is offended by my crazy 'bracketed' comments]
@ CG
[If you googled "king of fruits", you would notice that there are links to Durian. It has been given the universal title, whether we like it or not!]
[Am modifying this a bit.
"Sajan who?", everyone asked.]
Upon hearing that, Shrek
bought a new lamborghini ?
[@Sol, personally, I don't really care about the hierarchy in the fruit kingdom. I was just arguing for fun.]
to race with Ferrari.
Sajan got furious and
and refused to be
the one to wash
the dirt filled laundry
having multicolored fart smell
[there was no offense there - my timing was bad - got called off for a meeting then and just came back - all is well]
[the bracked was for CG]
sorry I missed this one. Seems like all of u r hvn good fun :)
Keshi.
Shrek demanded that Goldiogrella
accompany Ssajan to the
Chor Market and buy
sexy lingerie to celebrate
and they started singing
Jumma Chumma De de.
That is when Fiona
saw her ex husband
[sorry to make it wacko!]
with his new b/f
[ Sol - like this idea of sweet(!) story ]
, watching 'Boys Gone Wild'.
[LOL! there's all sorts of wacko stuff her Keshi]
not Girls gone wild
dreaming of free clothes
then fiona came to
[Continuing from here: Shrek demanded that Goldiogrella accompany Sajan to the Chor Market and buy sexy lingerie to celebrate and they started singing Jumma Chumma De de. That is when Fiona saw her ex husband with his new boyfriend, watching 'Boys Gone Wild', not 'Girls Gone Wild'. Dreaming of free clothes then, Fiona came to...]
the conclusion that he
[Getting excited at the story shaping up!]
so instead he ate
he was watching porn!
[came to the conclusion
that he was watching porn]
Fiona made up her
[Sol, did you see my email reply? Let me know how that works out.]
porn cd?
disguise as Richard Simmons,
[Sol, the disguise comment was in cont to Fiona made up her. Feel free to delete if u prefer the porn CD part.]
rated G.
[assuning porn cd part is continued]
porn cd rated G
[together makes 4 words]
only available to giant
[@sol
answered your question at that weird new post of mine.
Also made the post a little more weird and a little more sensible at the same time.]
[my my, isnt someone in mood for antithesis tonight.
Porn CD rated G (general, not giant)
That post of mine.
And post publishing changes made after publishing post, making it more weird and more sensible at the same time.]
hypocrites and their kids
In that porn CD
seeing Frogness, shrek shrieked
[lol CG I can see that ;-)]
Keshi.
@ Sol
[This is a brilliant idea! Just saw it today! LOLOL! Dint have the time to run thru all the comments but would love to read the story that comes out of it!!!]
And fell upside down
and big momma appeared
"Bring on the boys"
[Continuing from here In that porn CD, seeing Frogness, Shre shrieked and fell upside down and Big Momma appeared. 'Bring on the Boys'...]
she screamed, in jest
and the floor shattered
So he sulked away!
is it the end?
maybe yes maybe not
Ends bring new beginnings
Hope you enjoyed SHREK-IV
Shrek intravenous?
hahaha Stupid good one!
Keshi.
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